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Dragons and Knights

with all the dragons in the world
then where is my knight?

i stare out my castle walls
and i see them there flying about
some in disquise and some not
some of the disquises are not very good
i can see their horns and tails peeking out
but some i can barly see their true form

i see a knight ( i hope)
riding the wind
as an untamed stallion
with a smirk he smiles at me
as though he knows somthing i do not

atlas i see anouther
he battles in the courtyard
with my various pet beasts
a war he can't possibley fully win

i look at these two
and wonder if they are dragons
or just knights pining for my affection

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are you a knight or a dragon

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  • CharleeBoy
    September 15, 2008

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    wow.

    well written. truth be told, i was debating about if i should or shouldn't read this poem. i read to many that had the same plot, and were just dull. i have to say, yours was very orginal. and your knack for words is very unquie. so i hope you don't lose that trait, keep it up :]]