Take a knife and stab me
Take away my heart
Rip me off this world
Rid me from my life
Take away my misery
treat me as you like
Let me hate you
For a reason
And let it be a right
Watch me burn in hell
Nourish your sick mind
Nurture me with pain
Foster your delight
Lock me in a cimetry
Burry me alive
Let me loathe you
A good reason
To end your life tonight
Author notes
Option #3 title let me loath you. Well I didn(t know how to put a heart so just telling you that I read yourryles 
A contest entry
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Comments
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More suicidal than dark.
Eh.
I liked it.
Spelling is a must though.
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This is like reading one of my own poems. So much of the same intuition and philosophy. Wonderfully captured imagery and poignant emotions. Hands down the best poem I've read so far. *check ur spelling*
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Ok! thanks...
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