As she sits lonely and caged,
She makes sweet notes on her violin.
The angels seem to be out raged,
As a creep of a man caged her in Berlin.
The more she plays to pass the time,
The more the angels seem to cry.
As caging this beautiful woman is a crime,
So they send her sweet owls to spy.
The brown haired beauty does not realise,
That the angels have answered her tears.
As the owls seem to arise,
They come to rid her fears.
As they chew the bars,
and the handcuffs too.
They see the scars,
from the chains it's true.
As they whisk her off to a land,
A land of beauty and hope.
All so respectful and grand,
Where so can finally cope.
For now she must forget the terror,
That she had once gone through.
As to karma this is no error,
This happened for a reason, as she knew.
So for now she holds no grudge,
For the reason must be true.
Even though being caged was a drudge,
Her beautiful soul will now show through.
Author notes
I have the poem written (although not happy with it I'll probably update it too.
This poem is totally not what you think it will be
As for "ap family" thngy I have no idea 
picture credit : Maldicion_Divina_by_medusa04@deviantart.com
A contest entry
- Family Matters-pic prompt by Shadow Lynx.
900 points, ended September 21, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i think this is so beautiful, great imagery and words!! well done keep up the good work x
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i like this piece. this is a piece that pulls the reader in and out through different emotional aspects. the imagery displayed of the angels adds a vivid picture to the minds of the reader while keeping them emotionally attached to the brown haired beauty.
return the read!
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This is a really wonderful write for the picture! The storyline was really insightful and vivid in imagery! I really enjoyed this! you did a wonderful job!!
Angel
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Thank you so much
I'm really glad you like it!
I wasn't fond of it when I wrote it to be perfectly honest..but I'm gland other do
Thanks for your encouragment!
Karlie
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Thank you so much for your entry. A moving and wonderful poem you have penned here with a great story to it. From the depths of misery and chains to the beautiful lands of hope and happiness. A great piece of work Karla !!! As for the family may i suggest my AP niece? But if you wish to be something else then message me and ill be happy to change Thanks again for this excellent write !
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! I wasn't expecting you to like it!! Wow thank you tons really happy you liked it!
And yes Niece sounds good
Thank you tons again!
Karlie
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