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~Leave me with a sigh...

Your words and voice
carry a message -
through distance boundaries.

My thoughts convey,
to you love is on its way.

Life without hope,
or without love -
I wouldn't want to stay.

You lift my spirits,
when I am down.  
Make me laugh when,
need it most.

But most of all,
your love was given -
unconditional.

My heart belongs to you,
and my words.

My love you leave,
me with a sigh!

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 16, 2008

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    "My love you leave me with a sigh!"...powerful ending, and powerful words carry us through this write...I must read more!


  • forty-one
    September 9, 2008

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    Your words have left me speechless! If I do these things for you from a distance, we'll be crazy in love when we're up close and personal. Our hearts belong one to the other, and nothing can change that.

    Love you lots, Tish
    Troy


  • Nature Song silver member
    September 9, 2008

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    Tish,

    This is great. Wow, very impressive poem. I love how you put yourself, everything of you here. Great penning sis.

    ~Sie