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For she is Woman ( HM )

Roaming hillsides ever wandering,

footing laid in paths unfolding,

earthy soil one she treads.

 

Power of speech,

message drawn art,

paints wisdom in trails.

 

Feather light dreams a catcher,

safe sleep rests weary,

nightfall shadows the dark.

 

Spirit of strength,

ever deep,

raises to the surface.

 

Burnished flames enlighten,

flows in lava,

swept in tides ever turning.

 

Her aura glows confidence,

weakness falls silent,

for she is Woman.

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OPTION # 18:

"Feminine Energy - Fire"

By JoAn Greinert

A contest entry

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  • Kazytc silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    Wow sooo enchanting!

    How lovely this is, its so well presented and nice and easy to read yet rich in imagery and emotion, and so good a take on the chosen promot too. Well done on this one Julie its another masterpiece and love the take too great angle, you are very talented.
    Thanks Millions for entering it was an honour to have you in our contest.
    If only we could have awared everyone a gold you all deserved one!
    Please come back and enter my future contests ok!
    Poetic Hugs & Thanks Millions!
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xx


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      September 17, 2008
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      Thank you Kaz
      First for the invite, I loved the piece of art and it was an honor to write a poem, as I saw my words within.
      And for your lovely comment
      Best wishes always
      Julie x


  • UniversalVoice
    September 17, 2008
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    Enjoyable and insightful reading!

    Enjoyable and insightful reading! I could not agree with you more!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 10, 2008

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    Wowww.. hun this was just gorgeous.
    Beautiful imagery, thoughts, elaborations,
    language, and MEANING.

    Very powerful write I loved it!!

    Best of luck in the contest to you


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 10, 2008

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    this is an outstanding poem Mum. I can understand this one big time. hits close to home on this ..I really love the last 3 lines.. Excellent job with the prompt.. Fantastic & Brilliant poem..

    good luck Mum in the contest

    kat


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    September 10, 2008

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    Profound & visual...

    Impressive!!!
    Wonderful narrative, rhythm & flow (as always)...
    Enthralling throughout & intelligent enough to make me think & get my mind working of a morning. lol!
    Well done!!!


  • maralisa silver member
    September 10, 2008

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    a very beautiful take on the promt julie with some brilliant imagery I loved this poem from stanza one through to stanza six good luck in the contest my friend marina


  • daviscth silver member
    September 9, 2008
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    Almost forgot

  • daviscth silver member
    September 9, 2008

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    Sis, this whole poem, from opening line to closing word is totally stunning. I enjoyed it so much. Good luck...


  • jcat gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    "Her aura glows confidence,
    weakness falls silent,
    for she is Woman."

    Love this.....absolutely gorgeous!!! A most wonderful job in bringing the prompt to life!! Best wishes..


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 9, 2008
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    Great piece her honey

    You have such a flare for the poems of women and love


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    September 9, 2008
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    Beautiful take on the prompt, Julie
    I wish you luck in the contest!


  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 9, 2008
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    Best of luck hun!
    Can't wait to see the masterpiece

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