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innocent to guilty

from distraught fireflies
into flame-throwing devils
circling aimlessly.

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haiku.
5-7-5

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  • letters to no one
    January 9

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    Alliteration, I too enjoy, much like aanika.

    I likes all your stuff though

    Shelly
    xxx


  • aanika
    September 15, 2008

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    OOOOH
    I love this oneeee.
    so much imagery.
    I like flame and fireflies
    alliteration


  • sheltered
    September 14, 2008
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    Like the story of my life.