Spawned in wombs of thought,
grew time sapped lands,
a minds illusion, now distraught,
caressed in mankinds hands.
As vision fades in sight,
stillness breathes from deep within,
inner peace unfurls in light,
painting paths where we begin.
Author notes
option #9 Transfer old consciousness.
Credit artist Joan Greinert
In a list
A contest entry
- JoAn Greinert - Intuitive Artist - Works of Art - Multiple Prompts Contest by Kazytc.
2400 points, ended September 17, 2008, 40 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very interesting write here
Within the mind grows a multitude of seeds our paths we take will we faulter or lead for the eyes often lie and we become blind to our true need
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Wow I love this from start to end!
These are very beautiful words of profound widsom, tender feeling and depth of soul and heart, you have managed to successfully get right into the very core of this painting and lift the ambiance right up and out to bring the painting alive, wow that is phenomenal talent at work.
Lines like ...
Spawned in wombs of thought,
inner peace unfurls in light,
painting paths where we begin.
Wow just adore those and soo deep and soul searching fabulously visionary and ascended. Bravo, love this well done write on please, you are very talented indeed. Fabulously beautiful and enchanting, uplifting and transcending read.
Thanks Millions for entering it was an honour to have you in our contest.
Please come back and enter my future contests ok!
Poetic Hugs & Thanks Millions!
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Great choice of expressive words for this painting!
Great choice of expressive words for this painting! And such truth – You Got It!!! Thank you. Also, congrats on guessing the World Trade Center painting! Great!
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Out of old thoughts and into the new...the consciousness moves into place and inner peace unfurls from deep within...sighs...lost within your thought provoking words...excellent! niaish for sharing it with me
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Ah yes.Your mastery at work again.You always manage to fit so much in to so little space.Well done dear friend.lovely to read you once more, Ros
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I can see influences of Eckhart Tolle within this poem
amazing poem
finding inner peace within your own stillness
applause
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Very nice!
A poem of only a few lines, but very beautiful.
Well done. I love it.
Good luck in the contest.
Matske.
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You know Graham your poetry comes across to the reader as being so gentle and serene, you definately have a beautiful way with words. Well done and good luck in the contest. Val
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such beautiful language. good luck in contest.
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wonderful write, think you have captured the essence of the painting beautifully.... good luck in the contest
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Excellent work!!!
Best of luck in this contest!!! -Cyn
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amazing!!!
this is full of thoughts and puts one to read and enjoy
its excellent!!! and love to read more of your work!
juliet
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done. -
Great Imagery
Awesome take on the picture!! Your words puts the readers deep in thought. Great Write. You take care.
Best of luck.
Aunt Sandy
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nice wow this will be heard to beat iu did an alsome job with the pic bro if you win its much deseved keep it up bro
eternalsol
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Nice write relating to the picture prompt. I really enjoyed reading your take on this. Great job! Blessings, Patty
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