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Contains Religion

Just pause, look not too far and you'll find
yonder the shepherd a while past the hidden graveyard
a sign straightforward and unforgiving
shaped like the world rusting behind bars guarded
by a figure called god whom we pay millions of dollars
to protect a success that we created
when all that was learned was burned in a fire of hatred
that lived up to the legacy of ignorance its ancestors started 
disregarding that time would eventually catch up to its folly
now revived by that rareness in humanity when we have the freedom
to push the golden guard aside and read aloud the sign
that has been scarred by countless wars and wasted lives
because under us all it's just the bare earth we need to survive
but finally we have the opportunity to see it in writing:
CONTAINS RELIGION [Caution: may pollute your mind]

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  • VerminVomit
    September 9, 2008

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    i love it

    i think the word/name g*d should be censored....
    and a parental advisory explicit content sticker should be put on all "holy books"

    anyways the poem is absolutly amazing
    you dont find many poems which people say the truth


    • Southern Twilight
      September 9, 2008
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      haha Thanks

      Thats funny

      Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate it. Cant wait to read what you enter in my contest!