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[ you love her ]

you love her
…you love /her/…
>.<
.
.
.
that’s me trying not to cry
you can see…I don’t succeed

I read your poems, alex
and I pretended not to know
but I know
you’re talking about her
you miss /her/
not me
even though you say
…you say you love me…
and I believe you

I love you
I love YOU
>.<
.
.
.
that’s me trying not to cry
you can see…I don’t succeed

I dreamt of sex last night
and, alex, it was with you
[that’s how much I trust you]
but it hurt, alex
and you yelled at me for crying
[but it could never hurt bad enough
to make me really cry]

you love her
…you love /her/…
o.o
that’s me, alex
I’m not crying anymore
that’s ‘cause I cut myself

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  • paperacid
    September 26, 2008
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    Hoooooo...Please my dear sister and new auntie, don't get worked up over dis mahn. There will come a time when THE perfect oerson-oh blahlbah blah it doesn't matter anyway right now. I love ou, just leave that purdy alabaster skin o' yours alone!!!! I will be seeing u in a couple weeks n I've got a big stick n a crying babeh!!! <3<3

  • X-haydenx-xnochio-X
    September 18, 2008

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    uhhhhhhh

    i like it................but...................

    it's kinda strange with the crying smilly things.....

    i like it because it's a new style i've never seen before


  • backdrop.silhouette
    September 13, 2008
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    oh, dear.
    Cassie, you promised Laney.


  • Lexie
    September 9, 2008
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    wow this is a really really deep poem. very sad. girl we are always in some relationship where we feel jealousy towards an ex, but a lot of the time, it is our mind doing it to us and they are completely over the ex.

    you love her
    …you love /her/…
    o.o
    that’s me, alex
    I’m not crying anymore
    that’s ‘cause I cut myself


    great ending! great poem!


  • butterflytears
    September 9, 2008

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    cassiebeauty....i'm so sorry this happened to you. I wish there was something I could do.

    and I seriously hope you didn't cut.


    • Eaven
      September 9, 2008
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      she did, read her other poem, asa did that to her about me

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