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Retro

Euphoric at the sound of your voice.
Fervent at the hearing of your name.
Longing anew to mend a broken link that was never secure.

Diving in the appeal of your cuddle is a reverie,
your skin brushing mine is a dream.
Your sweet invasion of my body is a fantasy
Your engaging scent fills my air comforting me
Of your existence in my world.
Screaming my need to you is an inclination,
while hiding it is the most sagacious performance.

I am all over again a teenager in love,
former feelings I felt never died, rekindled.
Blazes of passion consuming me,
An ardent obsession haunting me,
Retreating to the virgin I was
When you first ever touched me.
Should I be ashamed or happy?
It beats me.


I yearn to feel you holding onto me,
sense your kisses all over me,
Blurt my love in lovemaking as a tradition.
Not so long ago all yielded to disappointment and pain.


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  • unavailable
    September 10, 2008

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    this is a beautiful poem...


  • Sonja
    September 10, 2008

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    Love always could be fresh the same as your poetry. Its obvious that you write from your heart. It is not easy to be exposed this way. Bravo.
    ~Sonja~


    • Nermin Nazim
      September 10, 2008
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      I bow for the Queen of Poetry

      My dearest Queen thank you so much and your words put so much tears to my eyes Love you as always Sonja


  • Clovis6790Curious silver member
    September 9, 2008

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    Excellent

    A very fine write. You expressed yourself very well.
    Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again, well done.


    • Nermin Nazim
      September 10, 2008
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      thank you as always my dear

      I was doubtful about this one. I worried it would be so plain and totally worthless. You made my day for the zillionth time. LOVE YA

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