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Time

People say
that Time destroys all;
crumbles magnificent buildings
into dust.

But...

I don't think that's true.
Though we are not friends anymore,
my memories of you
are still clear.

Even time cannot take that from me.

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yup

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  • LongPatrol
    September 20, 2008

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    Yes. It did cause emotion. But not too much. I wasn't sitting over the computer crying, no. But I did feel the meaning behind the poem. Good write.

  • stargazer72
    September 13, 2008
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    good