Rocks placed in memorial of a beloved pet,
whose life lives on in our hearts,
brings us pleasure yet
His elements feed this majestic tree,
that reaches toward the sky;
when it we view, we think of him,
wipe tears from our eyes
He fed this tree that oxygenates,
brings us air we need
We remember how he dashed,
he was a lively breed
He brought us fun and laughter,
on this tree he used to pee!
Words: K.Botka
9/9/08
Author notes
I wish I could add the picture! It's lovely, I'm a free member & don't have the ability! 
Ec 3:1 To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven: 
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Very good job with this write!
Great imagery and flow here.
Bravo
♥ Kate -
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Hey...
thanks again. I had a good prompt for this & I once owned a dog so had an understanding about the love of a pet & it's passing. Thanks for you comment Kate.
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I've heard of 'extracting the urine' (taking the piss) .... Very good. A good contest winner.
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you shocked me at the end, but with a big smile
adorable heartfelt write poetess.
God bless...
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=] very nice, great write. I'm going to have to keep my eyes on this one
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