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Enchanted Find

A crispy, green enchantment
Filled with magic, crimson hue
A gentle, calming hideaway
To quietly climb into

To hear the sounds of nature
Gently sliding through your mind
It clears away unhappiness
Your personal thoughts enshrined

The outside world has disappeared
A calmness takes control
Your mind sours high among the trees
You disconnect your soul

You travel on your aimless path
Admiring natures awe
Soul flitting through the hazy mist
Then sinking to the floor

And once again you quietly sit
In the cradle of mankind
Then realise it's time to go
From your enchanted find



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  • Philleebee8
    September 9, 2008
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    very well written,

    Good luck in the contest