A crispy, green enchantment
Filled with magic, crimson hue
A gentle, calming hideaway
To quietly climb into
To hear the sounds of nature
Gently sliding through your mind
It clears away unhappiness
Your personal thoughts enshrined
The outside world has disappeared
A calmness takes control
Your mind sours high among the trees
You disconnect your soul
You travel on your aimless path
Admiring natures awe
Soul flitting through the hazy mist
Then sinking to the floor
And once again you quietly sit
In the cradle of mankind
Then realise it's time to go
From your enchanted find
A contest entry
- Pic !! tell me what you see. by Philleebee8.
300 points, ended September 17, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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very well written,
Good luck in the contest

