When nights shade is drawn,
by our eternal pond,
in gown of variegated nature,
she leaves her caress on my heart
tomorrow to birth a new child,
my water muse.
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A contest entry
- Quickie Anyone??? You Know You Want To... by Sweet Impatience.
720 points, ended September 9, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow This was an exquisite take on the PIC I am stunned at the depth you have put in so few words
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BEAUTIFUL
soft and touching is the water muse, that with the dawn does gently birth, a new...sighs...i do love reading a gold should have won
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SERENE
lovely peaceful vision you have created
tomorrow to birth a new child
very profound
well done
God bless my friend...
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Wow! This is beautiful! Your short verse speaks volumes and is prettier than the picture you provided.
Love,
Amera♥
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very flowing and gentle, your imagery was vivid.
You did real good!
~Lisa~
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I loved this poem a lot and I really enjoyed it
good luck
kat
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This is lovely! Full of softness, tenderness - goes well with that picture. Great wording! I especially like,......well, I like it all!
best wishes in the contest.
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SUperb take, beautiful emotions portrayed. Good luck
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beautiful imagery & nicely worded. i enjoyed your take on this prompt~
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Wonderfully tight and full of lovely imagery... "gown of variegated nature"... beautifully said. I think you've captured the best of this image in your flowing words... Excellent! and best of luck...
Ken
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I actually think you did a great job with this and your interpretation is superb!!!! All in the eye of the beholder right? that is was gives us our unique touch.. best of luck and thank you for stopping by to read my piece
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