This is to all of those who
turned on me, left me in the dust,
bothered, disapproved and laughed at me.
There are some people
who assume that they are
the best and that no one could
ever reconseal what they have
started and done but
since yesterday, when
my boyfriend told me that
his friend that he considered
to be his brother had hung
himself, just what those
little, but terrible, things
can lead to in the future
I used to be one of those
people who as you walk through
the hallways at school
you get your books prauded
out of your hand and
then the inconsiderate
people just walk
past you and dont even mind
helping you pick up your books.
But now i stand up
for those worthless cowards
because they know that if they
piss me off its gonna be their heads.
As i reconseal the past,
and even the present
i begin to think of those
others who are now facing the
times that i had to face
when i was in middle school.
I will always stand up for those
who cannot stand up for
them selves, those
who are a minimee of what
i used to be. I will
never once again tolerate
the ugliness of ignorance.
I WILL STAND UP TO YOU!
Author notes
For those of you who think you are better than everyone else just because you may have a new bike, new clothing, new hair, fancy things or even better looks need to really consider the fact that one day you too will be faced with those horrible things that you had done to other people!
A contest entry
- [♥]Poetry Challenge[♥] by innocence jaded.xx.
3500 points, ended October 28, 2008, 61 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW very powerful. It's great that you'll stand up for yourself. Great write
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brilliant, powerful, angry, honest and expressive.
you wrote this in a very unique way, and you deserve an applaud for not using a rhyme scheme or things like that. it's both brilliant and strong.
well done!!
sherry
(that's me!! ) lol
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I will always stand up for those
who cannot stand up for
them selves, those
who are a minimee of what
i used to be. I will
never once again tolerate
the ugliness of ignorance.
I WILL STAND UP TO YOU
this is my fave part, this was a brilliant poem, i loved it and it was so powerful and emotional, well done on the write, msg me any links you want me to comment.
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Ohkay, so I absolutely LOVED this. What you fixtured this poem on is definitely a growing problem in our society, and you wrote it so uniquely & in an understandable way. People who think they're better than everybody else & judge people by appearances honestly aren't worth the time, and will get nowhere in life. They're the ones who learn the hard way. Sorry, didn't mean to preach there
This was very well written. I love how it was so real & pure.
All I ask is that you put the day of the week & the prompt in your Author's notes =) Thank youuu for entering & best of luck to you ! ♥
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