mountain of fire.

red turned yellow
your face like the Moon
hid from Sun in
a universal game of
peekaboo
like a child in autumn
when leaves burned
pigments
a mountain of fire
before you
and you jumped in.

Author notes

i can't put the pic in my poem sorry.

A contest entry

Pic !! tell me what you see. by Philleebee8. 300 points, ended September 17, 2008, 12 entries
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SHORT WRITES BUT POWERFUL IMAGES by DeadlyPoetic88. 1332 points, ended January 21, 17 entries
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By me, right now

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poetrycall
September 11, 2008
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These are really good images!
- Apocalyptic Scarves
  September 11, 2008
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  thanks
movedon
September 9, 2008

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okay so why am i even entering? this is wayyy better than anything i could ever write! Awesome!

Warmest,
Mylee