Crimson's tears show Death's touch
to the love that once moved mountains.
Tortured whispers of illusional lust
fall in delusional pain.
Heaven knows how far you've fallen
to meet with me at Hell's unholy gate.
Satan's bride of Frankenstein
crouched in virginal white.
"GET THEE FROM ME THY VIRGINAL WHORE!"
as my stake drives the life from your soul.
Author notes
59 words of dark love just for your viewing pleasure
Picture Credit: http://h-ybrid.deviantart.com/art/Because-I-love-you-73317732
A contest entry
- PIF Picture Prompt – Dark Love by KayJay.
700 points, ended September 14, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
On an unrelated note, I love that picture.
Very nice. The poem is unforgivingly dark and emotional. -
Wow, powerfully dark! An excellent take on that fab pic! Your words weave some gorgeous imagery, an awesome write hunni
-
WOW!!! Extremely dark poem.. I love this poem a lot. excellent take on the prompt..
good luck
kat
-
Wonderously dark! A creative tale of the dark side of love... "whispers of illusional lust..." You brought this picture to life with your emotional images... All my best...
Ken
-
Wow
Absolutely perfect. Great job with the prompt your words seemed to come alive with this poem. Keep up the great work I will be back to read somemore, Boog
-
you can almost taste the crimson in this poem wonderfully done my friend, wonderful dark in it's beauty. keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
-
wow...how very intense! you go, girl!
Your wording and the visions it inspired are rockin'!
Wishing you the very best in this contest!
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
