I have this knife in my hand
Getting ready to put it to my throat
I'm about to slice my throat
Do I dare
Just to get ride of this pain
I think so
There I go
Slitting my throat
Blood every where
I'm about to black out
Goodbye
A contest entry
- E.M.O ~ PoEmS xxx && brokenrosessooooofocate by Ryno.
400 points, ended December 8, 2008, 36 entries
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This is pretty cliche, even for a suicide poem. It doesn't go in depth enough for me to fall in love with it, and change my mind about poems like such.
Thank-you for the entry though, remember, take care, don't give up hope. -
ERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR I would die myself if you ever did this
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Babe I wouldn't do any harm to myself anymore
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I've been close
I've been really close to suicide before. I did do suicide once but my friend Peace, once again, saved me..I regret it alittle though. This poem reminds me of that. Very nice...keep up the good work.
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I've tried suicide already twice once ended up in the hospital, I just wanted to leave this world.
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