Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Exiled Stone

Stoned,
     lain beneath weep of willow,

bosomed
     in niche of nature's pillow



intoxicated,
     inhaling life's ferment

vineyards,
     saturate dreams with scent



wandered,
     lost beyond midnight's edge

agape,
     phantoms infiltrate the head



banished,
     from asphalt and high-rise,

exiled,
     autumn hues, now my disguise



nestled,
     beside roots, as if mother's feet

seasons,
     change, like thieves, stealing heat



content,
     worlds away from man and his laws,

peacefully,
     I dream, with no one judging my flaws









Author notes

Prompt:

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 11, 2008

    Edit | Reply

    splended

    Well Penned, wonderful write

     

    wandered,
    lost beyond midnight's edge

    agape,

    phantoms infiltrate the head

    i love this part!

    Blessings

    Rend



  • Philleebee8
    September 9, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Great write=]

    Good luck in the contest