passing by sweetly
the aroma of beauty
a cascade of thoughts
rose colored hair spray
a fresh scent of a shower
moist with desire
the scent fades away
the aroma of death is
the absence of you
A contest entry
- Haiku by sheltered.
1200 points, ended September 14, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great flow and imagery.
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Superb
A most intriguing write, indeed. You've expressed your self quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Again well done.
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EXCELLENT!!
This is absolutely one of the best haikus I have ever read. You have said so much in so short a poem. Memories of a loved one fills our heads and hearts and you have shown this in such an elegant way. Good luck in the contest. This is truly a winner in my mind. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain
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