Confusion
Uncertainty
I've lost you.
Passion
Anger
You're hurting me.
Sadness
Regret
I've let you go.
Did you notice?
No.
Author notes
Written January 20th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Tell Someone by .
300 points, ended May 4, 2004, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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this is awesome and i agree with Thomas (emo kid not) silence is sometimes the worst kind of torture and i cannot say enough how much i like this myself. keep up the work and good luck in my contest. thanks for entering.
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Wow great poem. Just simply great. I liked it alot. Silence is soemtimes the worst kinda of torture. I cannot say enough about how much i like this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is a most impressive poem. It has been strongly written and the structure is just right.
Well done!
Chris -
depressive! ;) *inside joke*
awwwww....*huggles you* i still wubble you. ^_^ i like the way you repeated the line structure in every other verse and the way it becomes more insistant and finally sounds defeated. (not that i like to hear you sound defeated but it works with the poem.
) i know what you're talking about but i'll let the others figure it out for themselves. which it seems most of them already have. 
you know i love your writing and i love you too. i'll always be here for you. keep writing and keep your chin up.
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sad :(
I like this. Bad relationship with a guy or something?
You continue to amaze me with your writing, keep it up! -
*sigh* tell me about it. Brillant poem
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I like this-- it's almost an emotional outpouring rather than a poem. I once wrote something similar to this when I was younger and a celebrity wouldn't write me back. I was such a nerd.
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Excellent !!!!!!!!!!
Very deep and passionate ! This reminded me , Of when I
had a relationship with a guy I truly loved more than he loved me ,
Treated me like dirt ! However , I get the feeling that your speaking about
the mind ??? Or could it be someone ??
No matter , I've really enjoyed reading this piece!
Thanks for your comment on my poem,
What a wonderful way to meet new people
Excellent write !
Yertweetyness
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Don't wait for him! Go out and have lots of fun, If he is smart, he will see what a great time you are having and will want to join you.. Great poem. -N
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I know this seems silly, but this really reminds me of me as a little girl and my Mom use to give me the silent treatment. Oh it was the worse. I wish she would have just beat the crap out of me, just anything BUT the silent treatment. It was the worse... And so are silent arguements, been there too. Nice work.
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nice
I could see your emotion in this write. good job -
Good
yeah, *knows how this feels* Keep up the awesome work, i really liked it.
EcStAcY
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