Gossamar light shimmers through filigree scene,
magical moment reigning, limitless, supreme,
softly lifts token leaves, proffered on skeletal boughs,
as echoes of a pilgrimage, Bride and Bridegrooms vows.
Intent on glorification as rhythms or breathless sighs,
entwine each prism of pure delight, reaching for the sky,
senses flare enlightened, touching ancient rite,
carrying whispered promises on wings toward the night.
Still the daylight dances, choreographed by natures whim,
enhanced by colourful pallett, spirals broad, then thin,
projectile movement, producing poetic, grand jete`
drawing into focus thoughts hidden there complete.
Author notes
I am unable to show the picture we have been given for this contest, however, please click on this link to view it http://allpoetry.com/contest/2420457
Thank you.
A contest entry
- Pic !! tell me what you see. by Philleebee8.
300 points, ended September 17, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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absolutely delicious. superb usage of words. enjoyed it thoroughly
wish you a Happy New Year
love
Pari
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Beautiful Katie as always. The imagery that is created here lingers long after the final word is read. Your writing never ceases to amaze me . An image left in the mind lasts for ever.....mal
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hmm ,
its kinda deep, i like it, but we'll see
Good luck in the contest=]
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