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Slither.

Under stones he waits,
The proprietor of natural causes.
Sleep comes to him mostly in fits.
Consistency is the hunter's tool:
never changing,
never swaying,
always staying...
alert.
The wind blows,
carrying the scent of his appetite.
The sun shines florescent,
deepening the shadow of his ambush.
Focus is the hunter's tool:
Never changing,
never swaying,
always staying...
Poised.

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For some reason when i looked at the picture, i imagined a snake hiding under those stones, awaiting his prey.

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  • Philleebee8
    September 9, 2008
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    =]
    It made me laught, i like it.

    • Scott Chason
      September 9, 2008
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      lol i didnt know it was funny. hope thats a good thing.


      • Philleebee8
        September 9, 2008
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        lol, it's just i didnt think about a snake hideing till now.