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Thin

To eat or not to eat
Such a horrible question
Disgust and shame
Food's to blame

Thin is in
Beauty is pain
Vomit my life
Cut fat with a knife

ED is so close to winning
This dreadful game
My body is hated
My mind berated

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    A poignant write which addresses a serious issue in today's society. A must read for everyone! You have done beautifully with this honest and courageuos write. I wish you only the best in life, as I can relate to your struggles.


  • KittyAnne
    September 9, 2008

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    *hug*

    sweetie, i know how hard this is for you, if there's anything i can do i'm here for you... you're beautiful just as you are

    great poem btw
    <3 u