You won’t forget me honey,
when we're older, will you?
Darling, you’re my first love;
I’ll still be breathing the
softness of your skin
after I’m fully grown.
Then, here’s one last kiss
for us to remember,
until you come home
and make me your little missus.
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Just a cutsie poem.
image from art.co.uk
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This is absolutely adorable...like the love you see on the movies!! The kids in the photo are adorable too and the poem and the picture work really well together to help create a strong, beautiful, light hearted poem.
I also find the first two lines really strong and very effective at drawing people in.
Great work.
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This is most surely one of the top "cutsie poems" I've seen!!
Favorite part:
"I'll still be breathing the
softness of your skin
after I'm fully grown"
Now that is just darlin'
Great job and loved the pic it has a since of innocents to it and you did it justice!!
darlintlc
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Awwwwwwwww... So so cute. I love the photo- and the title. The last stanza would be enough to rival a kitten in cuteness.
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The picture really makes this cute little poem. I love it. Well done! It's very sweet!
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