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Pigment

Brush strokes on a starving world
part of the thinner
the hairs removed one by one
a fading sinner

Looking closer becomes easier
who’s hand has control
given up for lack of strength
paying the devil’s toll

Once a pristine canvas shined
red has now painted you blind



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  • Confusedboy
    September 9, 2008
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    traveling the depths of thought processes, as one paint his vision of life.