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once upon a time

Once upon a time
There was Joey and Eve

Things were very hot that year

All the plumerias blossoming in its trees

He would climb mountains
Climb everywhere
Do anything for her

Oh Joey boy

Thousands of flowers
Exotic wild flowers adorned her hair

Everything was gold

One night the bed caught fire

He was beautiful
And a very good musician

We lived on moonlight
And junk food

It was the evening
Of abandonment and delight

Joey the audacious show-off

Eve the silent beauty

The moons last beams of pale blue light
Cruised like sharks

You came into my life really fast
And I liked it

I want to spend my life with you

We sparkled in the mud of our joy

I was wet thighed with surrender

Then there was a gap in things

And the whole world tilted

This is the problem

I'm an addict to the bottle

With you inside me
I become your burden

And perhaps you'll never sleep again

There was a demon in the water

Everywhere I looked

Thursday-I didn't mean that

And sometimes you hate me

Mother of sadness

Angel of the sea

Remember me in my opaqueness

You pointed to the sky
To the one called Sirius
Or dog star

Fly away sun

Ha ha fuck you
You are so funny Joe

A single plumeria by the bed

My tangled messy hair at dawn

These ruffled sheets
And you are gone

And I am going too

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  • Wow. SImply beautiful. =]


  • BrokenWings...Fly
    September 22, 2008
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    "These ruffled sheets
    And you are gone

    And I am going too"


    -Rayne


  • Facial Pagan
    September 21, 2008
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    Holy shit...


  • eves shadow
    September 15, 2008
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    Wow thank you so much.
    I didn't think anyone but Joey himself would be able to understand this poem.
    I'm greatful you could appreciate it as well.
    Thanx for reading


  • feetus
    September 15, 2008

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    Very sad....

    the title leads the reader to beleive that what they are about to read is light and uplifting....and then you immerse the reader into a very telling story of Joey and Eve. Well written, well felt. Thanks for sharing.

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