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falling


september song

rustles with amazing color

drifting leaves

Author notes

non-traditional haiku
prompt: September

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 16, 2008
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    very good haiku


  • DogFish silver member
    September 12, 2008
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    ...and it is all about to begin!


  • rbruce gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    I can see the leaves falling with splendid colours to carpet the ground.Short items have to be spot on for impact. You have made an impact very well here. Great!


  • poetryality silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    Very nice. I feel the float of the leaves through your words, see their brilliance as well. Excellent! I wish you well in the challenge.

    Renee