the convenience
of hell:
one need do
nothing
to
belong
A contest entry
- Short, Simple and Amazing by LadyLullaby.
300 points, ended September 11, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Namu Amida Butsu...
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Brilliant!
This is so right on! Short, accurate & to the point! Glad you won a trophy for this! This is just perfection & I think you should continue to enter this in as many contests as you can 'cause it needs to be seen! The road to hell is broad & many love to walk it!
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I've read this one a few times and I like it more each time I read it. It's so simple, but shows great creativity. Well done on the bronze!
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1st good luck on yer trophy..i do nout but i belong..how come..
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The Devil has no special requirements. He welcomes the procrastinators as happily as the false wittnesses, the white collar criminals, and the murderers. He seeks that ALL men might be miserable, like himself.
Our Heavenly Father asks us to love one another, forgive one another, repent of our sins and mistakes, and become the people He knows we can become.
He sent His Only Begotton in the flesh to teach us how to live, and to accomplish the Atonement and Resurrection, so that all will live again (like it or not), and may (but are not forced to) repent through the merits of our Savior, Jesus Christ.
Through the power of repentance, we become clean and make changes and course corrections. We find greater happiness as we work to live God's commandments more fully.
Why does He care? Because we (our spirits) are His own children, and He loves us and wants us to return to live with Him again in love, peace, joy and glory. He wants us to be comfortable in His presence, by being accustomed to living in the manner He lives. God's commandments teach us how He lives.
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*grins*
I love the simplisity of this it gives the poem some depth to think.
A wonderful write, Rose
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Oh boy, what a zinger this is! Excellent, something to ponder...
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I think I'm a member already! Great job!
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Aphoristic... and quite true.
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Great Title!
I really love the title of this, it fits perfectly!
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