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You Made Me

You made me..
You made me happy
With your laughter
Dreams of forever
And happy ever after

You made me laugh
With your teasing and attention
And that great big smile
Lets not forget to mention

You made me love
Like never before
To be prepared for life
And what's in store

You made me sad
With your absence and distraction
Of all your time
I got only a fraction

You made me cry
With your inconsideration
Your cruel words and fights
A constant recreation

You made me hurt
With your lies
Treating me as though I am
Something you despise

You made me feel
With your toxic love
Like I was suffocating
Yet couldn't get enough

Now no one can deny
Everyone can see
With this love you created
You made me.

~CJM 9/09/2008

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  • Grateful
    December 26, 2008

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    great poem with a soulful emotions of love, pain and pleasure....thanks for sharing...all the best to you....