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Autumns Calling

Can you hear the call so crystal clear,
how it rings in the night for all to hear?

Can you smell the air so crisp and clean,
rousing all creature's to glean?

Do you smell the brew of Autumn,
where-after leaves change costume?

 

O the time of delicate season,

causes me joy for many a reason.

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  • sora.
    September 13, 2008

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    i, too, enjoyed the depiction of autumn "changing" its leaves, as it would a costume.
    good work + good luck!
    =]


  • MYsecondchance
    September 10, 2008

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    ah! i love this your the first poet i've ever read that have used "O" besides ED or any of those people i love the 6th and 7th lines those are the best parts i love how u described the changing of the leaves as a change in costume
    great write


    • unavailable
      September 10, 2008
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      I use O often in poetry. I haven't posted everything here though, but it is in some of the others that I've posted here.


  • Samplette gold member
    September 10, 2008

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    This is a beautiful piece of poetry. A wonderful read for me. I enjoyed the view your words allowed me to see.
    Sam

  • Liquid memories
    September 10, 2008

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    Oh yes i do feel it. Always stimulating the season changes. Lovely words to describe the coming fall.

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