I close my eyes and turn away from you
Memories of how we used to be flood my thoughts ♡
And it makes me wonder...
Did you even love me at all, was it love or was it lust? ♡
I thought we were complete, set to be one
Until you broke me down to nothing, diminished my hopes ♡
For your sake, I hope she was worth loosing me over
Was she there, behind my back, all along? ♡
Hiding in the shadows till I had left your side?
Brought her into our home into our bed ♡
Dirty sheets will never come clean ♡
The place where we, too, made love in candle light
I cant take you seriously anymore, you murdered our love ♡
I walk away from you slowly, thinking of what Im leaving behind
It hurts but this must end, I shall not return ♡
Youll continue to hurt, but it wont be me
Author notes
3.If he was stupid enough to walk away
be smart enough to let him go.
A contest entry
- Such a Painful Love by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended September 27, 2008, 24 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
my lines have ♡ by them
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I love this!
I totally understand where your coming from!
This is a very good piece, the emotions were simple as easy to follow, and I appreciate that in a poem.
It was very pulled together and fun to read.
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the little hearts are my lines hehe
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haha, its cute xD
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well done on the bronze babe
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thanks
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a brilliant poem, once agin another wonderful write from you, you are a very talented girl, well done, xx
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awww ur making me blush! thanks so much
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this poem is awsome.
keep up the good work
kayla.// xx -
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thanks
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i like this poem a lot it shows how something so strong can be riuenied without a second thought and that i can just fall apart if it doesnt have enough strength good job with the collab and both yall keep up the writing,
~Amy
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thank you, yup exactly! i hate cheater grrr lol we will! i plan on collaborating much more
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xoxo
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