symbols create without an effort
eyes see only what light diffuses
covering all doesn't promise purity
artistic treasures form new ideas
lowering eyelashes to instant shame
deceit can't cover the naked truth
Author notes
picture prompt (click to view)
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Contest/2420/397.jpg?1220957698
Annie by Comosue from deviantart.com
32 words
A contest entry
- PIF Picture Prompt – Something for your imagination by KayJay.
700 points, ended September 13, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into gold (or silver or bronze) #6 by whispernthedark.
700 points, ended September 27, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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covering all doesn't promise purity
Great line there... wonderful write. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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"deceit can't cover the naked truth"... A strong statement of truth! I found this very creative and well written... many images called forth by your words... Excellent and creative write. All my best...
Ken
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. Such a great choice of 32 words. Best of luck in the contest.
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A piece deeply reflective of the artist model and a prelude to"more than meets the eye" by diffinition.Short powerful verse.
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