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Secret Missive

The well rolls
ship tossed

Ink soaks
imprinting
fancy font

heralding
treasured scroll


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13 Words
Visual Stimulation: http://abstraktphotography.deviantart.com/art/Poetry-52492873

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  • mysty rain
    September 15, 2008

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    Oh, I really like this, especially the middle part. This is a great job with the prompt. Good luck in the contest. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 15, 2008

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    How intriguing with a sense of pirates ... Unique


    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • nature
    September 14, 2008

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    Well you must be a pirate.

    Looking here for a scroll that too a treasured one.

    I really thought pirates of today loved chocolates well I can give you some if you just back off.

    Lol
    a nice ship moving to write history.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    This is very cool. Grand images you have created with so few, but perfectly selected words. Well done. Good luck in the contest.


  • PrincessOfFire
    September 14, 2008
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    A very descriptive take on pic. Makes me feel piraty if thats a word.lol Good luck. Rose


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Gorgeous. I love the beauty of this little poem. Well done I think this will do so well in the contest. Best to you


  • Topaze
    September 14, 2008
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    A lovely piece, my best wishes in the contest.


  • banrion
    September 14, 2008
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    how very piratey! I love it.
    Best of luck in the contest.
    SJ


  • Confusedboy
    September 9, 2008
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    most impressive thoughts you have written. thanks for sharing.

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