is there such a wonders place on earth
were two moon can share the sky
has a sight ever been seen
or is it an eclipse of light
some where out there a beauty lays
dormant within the past
gentle rushing waves
with castle in the sky's
this land we speak is magical
within its mystic veil
fairy tales and dreams are spent
its the place within our hearts
so never stop believing
and let your hopes run free
believe in they unknown
and dream within a dream
A contest entry
- Pic Prompt by Riamh.
600 points, ended September 21, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A beautiful composition and a very good take on the prompt. well done. Thank you for entering in the contest. Best of luck.
Be well,
Slayer -
Your words fit the picture prompt exceptionally well, like they were made for each other,well done!!
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wow
thanks a lot......i'm glad you enjoyed it and liked it
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Wonderful poem! I love the ending when you say "and dream within a dream." I marvel at what you said and I must say you are searching deep within to find what dreams can unveil. Great write!
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thanks hon
your words mean a lot more to me then you know.....thank you......
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this land we speak is magical
within its mystic veil
fairy tales and dreams are spent
its the place within our hearts
This is very lovely. The words flow from your pen very well. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest! -
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thank you
i'm gald you liked......thank you for the comment and kind words
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