Gentle hands caress curved desires
captured within silver streaks of lust
as a moonlit serenade plays for two
naked...bare their souls
legs entwined in rapturous whispers
spirits soar becoming one
lips gasp...words unspoken
eyes speak language of love
diamond voyeurs watched silent
encrusted in ebony sky
caught by the honesty of their touch
midnights breath in pleasure cried
Author notes
Option #3 Unknown
40-60
A contest entry
- PIF Adult Quickie! by K a t.
1200 points, ended September 10, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Oh... sooooo Sensual Please! by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended September 21, 2008, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well done sweet sugar-a silver well deserved!
Hilly xxx
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diamond voyeurs watched silent
encrusted in ebony sky....
Oh my I loved this,
Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Thank you for the silver and your lovely comment,
valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Beautiful Writing
Breathtaking writing here. Very very romantic. The imagery is stunning. Very beautiful writing from a writer whose work is getting better with every press of the keys. I found this took me away somewhere else. Love is deep within the confines of the mind...
Darkest Love
Wayne Leon
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Hiya sweetie, always a pleasure to have you stop by and read. Thank you for your fab comment and constant support...
Means so much to me..so glad you enjoyed..the ending of your comment so true.
Darkest Love
Chelle xxx
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This was really wonderful! soft and sweet.. You really brought sensuality to life here.. Well done.. Thank you very much for sharing, best of luck in the contest..
Angel
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Thank you for your lovely comment, so glad you enjoyed this. I had fun writing this.
~sugar~
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A LITTLE BIT OF SUGAR - GOES A LONG, LONG WAY!
diamond voyeurs watched silent
encrusted in ebony sky
caught by the honesty of their touch
midnights breath in pleasure cried
A fine piece, Sugar. I prefer an all-nighter to a quickie BUT a quickie as sweet and as sensual as this would hit the spot right about now! GOOD LUCK in this contest with this one, Baby - and Thank You SO MUCH for giving me the heads up on it - in more ways than one - and now I'm off to DREAMLAND to cry out in pleasure with just a little bit of pain in Miss Honeys' Dungeon!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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Sometimes sweetie a quickie just hits the spot
I hope you had fun in Miss Honeys' Dungeon. Glad you enjoyed this Earl, thank you for your fab comment, always a pleasure to share with you.
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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Oh hun this is so beautiful
Soft sensuality whispers in elegance
Love your final stanza, sigh!
Best wishes in the contest
Julie
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Thank you Julie for your lovely comment
Congrats to you on your silver
~sugar~
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Wow.
Erotic, yet tasteful. Very pretty words, sis. Good one.
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Always a pleasure bro, to have you read and comment.
Appreciated
your sis
~sugar~
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i think twodie4 summed it up~
this is a beautiful write, nicely done with lovely images. best wishes in the contest.
tim
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Thank you tim for your lovely comment.
Truly appreciated
~sugar~
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Sug, I have to agree with Amazira a classic stunning...the flow and the feel to this takes you on a beautiful journey of love and loving. You have some wonderful lines in this poem that just stand out to me
lips gasp...words unspoken
eyes speak language of love
This speaks so much to me, words do often go unsaid that are spoken within the eyes..the eyes give away so much, especially when it is the look of love.
diamond voyeurs watched silent
encrusted in ebony sky
Wow hon the thought of the stars watching amazing I absolutely love that line.
caught by the honesty of their touch
midnights breath in pleasure cried
Your last line just perfect...sent shivers through me...the honesty of a lovers touch...an amazing thought, then midnights breath in pleasure cried, hon stunning...is it their breath in the midnight air or the midnight air swirling around them crying out a gust lifting them?? Either way perfect.
This deserves to place...you girl are so in love
Good luck with this in the contest
All the best
Emma
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Blooming heck Em you had a lot to say LOL!! I am so glad you enjoyed it...Thank you so much hon for your wonderful comment...means a lot.
~sugar~
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This is classic, 'onesugar'
I like the pic, the poem, the color choice and I like the finish. "Midnights breath in pleasure cried." is a great poetic line that does well in ending this piece. -
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Thank you Greg, so glad you enjoyed
Always a pleasure
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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Oooh
How Pretty very romantic stuff you've got here sis. I really like this a lot 
good luck in the contest.
Always,
e
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Thank you sis...good to see you
A pleasure to have you read
Much love ~sugarcookie~
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