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Combustion

                                                            Composite life in colored lies

                                                            as vibrations comsume the soul.

                                            

Wandering fingers sculpt 

the blueprint of destiny from

a moonstruck mind..

                                                                    

 

 

Deviant urges shatter sensitive innocence

while monstrosity contemplates its

combustion of insanity...

                   

 

                                 

Author notes

http://cades2k4.deviantart.com/art/Limits-91876786
http://cades2k4.deviantart.com/art/Closer-to-your-matter-96853261
http://darma.deviantart.com/art/Bestia-en-la-nieve-96515129


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  • poppa
    September 19, 2008

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    This is wonderful ...love your imagery and you have created some amazing metaphors...
    good luck in the contest



  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    I do love it when you combine prompts and go crazy on them all, yet another of those wonderfully thought out and constructed poems. Congratulations to you on the shiny green trophy angel. Best to you


  • Kazytc
    September 12, 2008

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    Phenomenal Masterpiece!

    Beautifully crafted and to total poetic perfection and such phenomenal fine art artistry and scultping, love the stepped poetic graphics and pictures illustrating the poetic cascade of rich and well chosen and used descriptives in what is quite clearly a masterpiece and if something like this was entered in an 'art's contest judged by artists it would win gold straight off, no messing!
    Breathtaking and fantastic you are phenomenal and this is Poet Laureate with no contest!
    Love it, bravo, extremely well done Sis!
    Poetic Hugs and Congratulations on this one wow!
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xx


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    I like how you used all the prompts here.. it was like life consuming, destiny being wrought, and eventually the shattering of innocence into instanity.. creepy kinda ... in a good way


  • notorious gold member
    September 10, 2008
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  • stavykm gold member
    September 10, 2008

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    Wow this is just an amazing write. So well done and with each picture too. Best wishes in the contest. Your imagery is excellent I thought.
    Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • jcat gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    This was just pure brilliance!! Love your word choice and the way you went from one pic to the next so fluidly!! Very well done and best wishes


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    September 9, 2008

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    wow i just ummmmmmmmmmm whats that word oh yea i love it....... hehe.... hugs sissy.... good luck a sure winner in my book.....


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Oh wow hunni! This is awesome!! That second verse just melts as I read it...superb work I love it Good luck in the contest


  • Riamh
    September 9, 2008

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    I love this! Best of luck in the contest, Angel.
    *hugs*

    Slayer

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    I think this is great the one I like the most is the last one goodluck to you in her contest best wishes and much love

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