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Rage of Fury ( HM )

Suppressed rivets delve deep,

sprung explosive temper,

launching  white rage,

flipped switch,

on off...

 

Topped head screaming,

limit crossing

boundaries.

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Prompt 3 20 words
http://cades2k4.deviantart.com/art/Limits-91876786 ( Limits )

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    You've really captured the feeling of anger and rage exploding in this write! Which is a great take on that picture! Some boundaries surely shouldn't be crossed hey!


  • jcat gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Yep!!! This was me a few weeks ago!!! You captured the rage within the fury very well indeed....Best wishes here!!


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Well done! Great word choice which was very descriptive and well understood...we all have a limit and I know I have hit mine from time to time...lol
    Love the flow and metaphor...
    Excellent as always!
    Best,
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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Wow wicked piece hun, fab pic to..I used the same one Can feel the heat here for sure, excellent imagery, good luck


  • daviscth silver member
    September 9, 2008

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    You do such an outstanding job with these short ones Julie. The imagery is very vivid and though your poems always capture my attention, it seems to be the endings that really get me. Good luck in the contest.

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