Suppressed rivets delve deep,
sprung explosive temper,
launching white rage,
flipped switch,
on off...
Topped head screaming,
limit crossing
boundaries.
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Prompt 3 20 words
http://cades2k4.deviantart.com/art/Limits-91876786 ( Limits )
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt (PIF) by kiwigirljacks.
900 points, ended September 13, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You've really captured the feeling of anger and rage exploding in this write! Which is a great take on that picture! Some boundaries surely shouldn't be crossed hey!
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Thanks hun and for the HM x
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Yep!!! This was me a few weeks ago!!! You captured the rage within the fury very well indeed....Best wishes here!!
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Well done! Great word choice which was very descriptive and well understood...we all have a limit and I know I have hit mine from time to time...lol
Love the flow and metaphor...
Excellent as always!
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Wow wicked piece hun, fab pic to..I used the same one
Can feel the heat here for sure, excellent imagery, good luck 
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You do such an outstanding job with these short ones Julie. The imagery is very vivid and though your poems always capture my attention, it seems to be the endings that really get me. Good luck in the contest.
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