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The Slayer And Her Vampire

Oh how such a poetic, tale so tragic,
filled with doubt, despair and magic,
her dearest Angel, a kindred soul,
in such little time, her heart he stole,

A love so sweet and oh, so tender,
to which they both surrender,
with every kiss he feels such pain,
and tries once more to leave again,

But love held on and kept them close,
Buffy felt it in her heart, the host,

Their tragic dance at the hight-shool parade,
for one night they masquerade,
Moonlight shining in their eyes,
stealing moments under nightly skies,

As the daylight draws so near,
Angel now must disappear,
leaving Buffy all alone,
In silent moments they atone,

Her dearest love and fatal rose,
Her Angel, heart-ache, only knows,
He tried to give up all one night,
To stay awake until the light,

Buffy pleaded, begged and cried,
How would she still live if Angel died?
She told him the meaning of strength and hope,
He told her how he could not cope,

He asked, "Am I a righteous man?"
Buffy stared and then she ran,
He pushed her down "The world wants me gone,"
She looked at him, her eyes withdrawn,

"I know everything you did, you did it to me,"
and then Angel could finally see,
Hand in hand, into the snow,
Away from they dawn they will go,

The end of the story how it nears,
Angel will leave Buffy in tears,
Still burns love's eternal fire,
Between the slayer, and her vampire,

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  • vampedvixen
    October 12, 2008

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    Huzzah! More Buffy poetry from the great Buffy poetess! The only thing I felt was a little odd in this poem was the third stanza, which broke the rules of the other stanzas with only two lines. It seems to b missing something.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    This is just awesome I loved it thank you for sharing your heart talent and love Best wishes always Kuddos to you


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Great stuff...

    Captures the essence of the Buffy/Angel forbidden love plot with a grace & elogance that is both endearing & relatable to many things in life that we love but know are bad for us...
    Another fantastic write...
    Well done!!!

    • Georgia La Mariposa
      September 9, 2008

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      Thanks Fritz glad you like it, i'm writing a lot of good buffy poems of late the bit withn the quotes is from the episode Amends if you were wondering


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    So good

    This is very,very moving.

    I think between us we should write the 8th series, it would be a sure fire winner.

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