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Until The Day

the night is long,
as i walk along the shore,
i softly sing my song,
for the one that i adore.

we secretly meet,
and tell not a soul,
we have to be discreet,
or we may lose control.

i see you on the sand,
as i call out your name,
you look over and then stand,
and we start our little game.

if they knew what would perspire,
between us two tonight,
our time together would expire,
and we may never reunite.

we go on with our lies,

for years and years to come,

until the day, when we say our goodbyes,

till the day we must succumb.

 

 




 

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    October 10, 2008

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    This is refreshling unusual and creative. I enjoyed that. I also like your take on the prompt, sort of like two lovers that have to secretly meet until someone finds them out, or something like that. Thanks for entering


  • ml12
    September 14, 2008

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    perspire? I'm not sure if that was the word you were looking for, maybe it is. I find this poem unusual, especially the ending and I appreciate that. Cheers and good luck in the contest