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Must Have Been Simple

He said she was his world.
Told her he loved her.
Held her tight,
Maid her smile,
And spoke of forever.
But...
He let her walk away.
Never really asked why.
Just let her say goodbye.
Never even shed a tear.
I guess she wasn't his world.
And must be he didn't love her.
Forever,
Became short lived.
Replacing her must have been simple.
She walked away,
And he just let her.

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  • Time focus on Me
    September 21, 2008
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    Alsome

    He said she was his world.
    Told her he loved her.
    Held her tight,
    Maid her smile,
    And spoke of forever.
    U did a great job with this whole poem. I loved reading it u have alsome talent and beautiful work. Loved the poem keep da ink flowin. once again alsome work