Fade into the past
Back to memory
Relive the days long forgotten
Soak up emotions once had
Relish in the tranquility of the moment
Forget the pain of now
Look back and remember
Become what has been lost
I speak in riddles
The tongue cannot answer
The heart dreams
And the soul flies
Meditate in the moment
Glimpse back
Into the long forgotten past
Please tell me what you think
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It shows great emotion, however, the lines 'I speak in riddles The tongue cannot answer' almost shows a forced mystique. Like you're trying to corrupt your feeling with thought, in order to force the reader to break free of the meaning long enough to lose it. Good to see you put something up after so long.
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