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Shadow's Heart

a shadow of the moon sighs silence
the silence cold with unfeeling touch
the shadow frozen by winter’s silence
a shadow of the moon sighs silence

a whimper cried from depth of heart
the heart in need of human touch
the whimper freed by winter’s silence
a whimper cried from depth of heart


Author notes

This poem was prompted by the rhyme scheme form that has been developed by myrataal, and coined the 'Myrrha'. Please see the following to find a description of how to write this form: http://allpoetry.com/poem/4574375

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    A beautiful muse's thoughts...

    flow in sublime waves, right from the soul of one so talented, drawing our minds into a state of silent awestruck reverence. Thank you for sharing your creative talent with all of us!!! Peace Always, Cyn


    • FransB gold member
      September 9, 2008
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      Thanks Cyn,

      it's always lovely when you drop by. I shall take your peace blessing into my day. Frans