Love and war
Sweet lover gone, never to return.
War is your death,
A bullet through the heart, to mine as well.
Enter my soul, as I cry out tears of blood.
The whispers I hear, avenge his death.
As memories haunt my dreams.
Shall I continue, live on without your name.
I’m wilting, like the roses in my hands.
Nothings the same.
Author notes
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"Bamboozled
there a lot of war going on and so many love ones die in Battle when i saw this pic this is what i though of i hope you enjoyed my poem
A contest entry
- PIF Picture Prompt – Dark Love by KayJay.
700 points, ended September 14, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give Me Your Very Best. by feetus.
875 points, ended December 1, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"A bullet through the heart, to mine as well."
I like that. Strong line. Thanks for entering
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thanx `
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Very poignant and touching... a lovely write. Well done and all the best...
Ken
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thanx so much
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Extremely heartfelt, and very beautiful piece. War is hard, though sometimes needed; it doesn't ease the pain.
Best to you in the contest.
Sam
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thanx so much yea its heard to go through something like that
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wow beautiful. good luck
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thanx i might need it
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it's good.
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well think you
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no problem.
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