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nihilism

She bled infernos
as offerings
to chaos.

And The Enigma
questioned:

'Why do you remain solid?'
 
nihilism eats away at itself.
 
She tied a knot
to sacrifice herself
for darkness
 
And The Enigma
stated:
 
'That noose will not make you uncreated.'
 
nihilism eats away at itself.
 
 

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Prompt 1

Just where my mind wandered.

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  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    Sometimes the random trains of thought can make the best poems Very well done, my cohort, and congrats on your most-well-deserved gold


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    Wow.. I think your mind wandered somewhere great! This has such a great flow and thought... the thought that existance without meaning is something that eats away at itself..
    The whole thing is fab!!


  • JabberWokk
    September 10, 2008
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    This is a very interesting poem, I love it.

    Good luck


  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 9, 2008
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    Eppp so in awe forgot the clappy guys, sorry

  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Oh wowzy! The opening verse is friggin awesome I love this! Really need to find time to read more of you Awesome work, good luck but you shouldn't need it

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Wow As always I am impressed I like these lines :
    She tied a knot
    to sacrifice herself
    for darkness
    Great write goodluck in her contest but you should not need it this is beyond brilliant


  • notorious
    September 8, 2008

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    Oh hell yeah

    This is some awesome narration...almost a bit like prose to me.

    Shit, I didn't know you entered this contest...
    *pulls out reservation*
    LMAO

    I love "The Enigma". Kind of like "The Oracle"--w00t!

    The question posed 'Why do you remain solid?' is amazing. Makes me think of "Why the hell are you still breathing, you unworthy cretin dickwad?!"

    Love it.

    "for darkness"
    Could that 'for' be a 'to'? I dunno, I think it sounds smoother that way.

    Nihilism...coolio.

    Jessica


  • perfectsunset gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    Wow bro this was just exceptional.
    Your thoughts are of such brilliance!
    Loved this piece.. definately gold in my eyes.

    Best of luck in Jacks' contest


  • Cannonsfire
    September 8, 2008

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    Wow you should let your mind wander more often! Although i suspect you are talking about your own dark thoughts here. ;f C

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