Walking on the walls,
hollow to the core.
Voices in the halls,
she hits the floor.
Pieces and bits,
here she lies.
Dying down are the fits,
as she loses her disguise.
Author notes
Prompt 2. Artist: http://cades2k4.deviantart.com/art/Closer-to-your-matter-96853261
A contest entry
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900 points, ended September 13, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Ahh I think we all have many disguises we wear! Those being taken down can be a harsh thing also. Excellent take on the prompt!
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Love the rhyme, has a good beat while reading. Good luck
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frightened
The playful rhyme with the macabre (?) subject matter create a very eerie poem. Very atmospheric
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