If your nose is stopped up the sulfur will help
It’s the most obnoxious smell you’ve ever smelt
It will clear you of those dry itchy eyes
Because that smell will make them water as you cry
In when the winter days makes you frown
Hell’s a place that’s steaming all year round
So grab your hat you won’t need a coat
Come visit the man with feet like Billy goats
And when your long life’s journeys end
The convenience of Hell is waiting my friends
Author notes
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The convenience of Hell
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Taken straight to hell
I loved the imgary when I read this as well the the flow.
A wonderful write and I wish you all the best for the future.
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Thank you so much for the comments. God Bless
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