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Thoughts

Endless time spent lost in dreams
 On a long summer afternoon

Visions of things that may become
In a future that comes to soon

Echos from my lost childhood
That still color all those thoughts

Shaping this that I have become
When from fate I drew my lot

The man whose face in the mirror now
Strange to the child in my soul

Makes me wonder who I have become
This man that I try to know

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  • Melodies
    September 18, 2008

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    When I read your poetry I always think I wish I could appear as a pixie, in your pocket, and smile up at you. This poem makes me happy.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Who you have become is someone I have found to be kind and caring, a gentle soul and a tender voice through your poetry!
    Embrace that inner child that lost his childhood...