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Holy Ground Zero

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September eleventh dawned bright and clear
as New Yorker's commuted to their chosen careers.
The hustle and bustle of a typical day
ne'r foretelling what loomed on the way.

Once, the Twin Towers stood proud and tall,
condemned by hatred to burn and fall.

So many innocent souls were lost.

So many memories, forever embossed.

 

Many were screaming or fighting for breath.

Many dropped from the towers and fell to their death.

New York City, once complacent and proud,

now weeps within its smoky shroud.

 

Ground Zero was the chosen name

assigned to the carnage that still remained.

Dust and smoke was everywhere

as screams of horror filled the air.

 

Grieving families tears were shed

as fighter jets flew overhead.

Our nation was put on full alert;

another attack, to avert.

 

September eleventh, Two thousand and one,

will ne'r be forgotten by anyone.

The souls never die; They shall live on as heroes.

and are sanctified at Holy Ground Zero.

 

 

 



 

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Dedicated to all those who perished in the 9-1-1 tragedy and their grieving friends and families.
May we always remember and learn from this horrific experience!

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  • trekkergirl
    September 14

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    love the picture helps me to remember that it is true that we are in a battle for our lives and safety. Even at home we have to be aware that our peace can change in a matter of moments... and that just because you are innocent does not mean that you are safe.

    Thanks for sharing this with us. And thanks for entering it into my contest.

  • The devastation is still fresh in my mind. Thank you for your heartfelt words of truth.
    In God's Love
    Three Doves

  • You tell such a good and coherent story.. A day which, along with a few others, will live in infamy.. A wonderful tribute..

  • So many memories as I saw it happen as Katie Curic
    on Today was talking,background vision looked
    like a stunt happening,but tragically it was reality of as you said horrific scheme,
    nice tribute
    Congrats on the win
    O...


  • daviscth
    April 28

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    This poem gave me goosebumps. You have told their story so well Al. I doubt any of us will ever forget that day. Congratulations on the bronze.


  • Kazytc
    September 17, 2008

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    Congratulations on bronze!

    This is phenomenal so well penned wish we could have awarded you all gold, its so hard that we have to award only one Gold.
    Your poem is amazing love the essence and feelings here the sentiments and the way as always with your fine works, it flows and rhymes to total perfection.
    You have penned something phenomenally moving and deep, intense and feeling to a massive depth and you honour those caught up in 9/11.
    Well done on a phenomenal penning.
    Wow what a fabulous penning here my friend, you have excelled yourself and I am not surprised this proved to be a winning poem.
    You have gone right deep into the painting and penned something which has brought the painting to life.
    Love the vocabulary here too, brilliant on rhyme and flow and poetically perfect with great essence and ambiance.
    Well done you are phenomenally talented and it shows!
    Bravo, write on this is well deserved! Wish we could have awarded everyone gold! You are amazing as is your work!
    Poetic Hugs & Thanks Millions for entering it was an honour to have you in our contest.
    Please come back and enter my future contests ok!
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xx


  • UniversalVoice
    September 17, 2008

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    Excellent adaptation of a tragedy

    Excellent adaptation of a tragedy we will never forget. Beautifully written! Deserved of the Bronze! Great Job!!!


  • inspired-8 gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    Beautiful tribute.


  • jcat gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Your words here are as beautiful as you are my friend! It is indeed a day that we will mourn forever more! One day I hope to visit this place to pay my respects to those that gave their lives......Many blessings to you!!!


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Very touching tribute to all who were lost on that horrific day.
    a memory we all share.
    excellent write my friend
    very sad and endearing
    God bless Poet king...


  • Nicada silver member
    September 9, 2008

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    Wow! This is a beautiful poem for the picture prompt! You did a nice job portraying what that fateful day was like. I like your rhyme scheme, and the rhythm is great too. I wish you the best in the contest, and I enjoyed the read. Blessings, Patty


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    An excellent poem commemorating that fateful day that the world will never forget.

    Beautiful words ...

    Sue

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