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Stiff Joints

Complexities binds us down,

as we inhale

material deviation ,drown

with lamentation

stiff, joints frail.

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  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    wow

    how can one feel, but sore, as stiff jointed is nothing but such, thank you for this entry, good luck
    Linda

    • saddie23
      September 8, 2008
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      thank u

      Thank you for the wonderful comments given to my poem. I'm glad you liked it. Saddie23